Saturday, June 2, 2007

Under The Glory Of Basking Sun

Under the glory of basking sun
Lie some cries unheard
Fall but only on deaf ears
Hoping to pierce some little bit of a sensitive soul

The trees quiver with shaking fear
Against the mighty wind;
Who, with its mighty jaws uproots everything in its path;
And sounds like a lion roaring to brag pride

My conscience hollers out colossally
Encumbers my path to free will
Act out by mind or by heart?
Is what I need to resolve
But hey! The greediness of the lurking shadows whispers in the dark
Tempting me to listen to the adages of thee
Compelling me to follow their commands
And to become their slave eternally

My mind starts loosing control of itself
My body forces me to dance to their commands
I try to rebel against my own self
But my mind pre-occupied in its preposterousness
Can’t think of anything, can’t follow its master!
And makes me feel like a windmill with a single blade in a hurricane

I shout out, I cry “Leave Me Alone”
I ain’t gonna fall under your domination
I fight with all that’s left in me
Against my own body that’s no more mine

I belong to God, I’m his humble servant
I choose to die rather than serve you
My arms, freezed to the ultimate treachery;
And denying my own-self to work for good;
Rise above against all odds;
Mighty high with a strong cry;
To break all the manacles tying me up
To prove that goodwill always defeats wicked cry

I escape the treacheries hoaxing me to temporary happiness
And I once again feel at ease
‘Cos I was able to stick to perpetual happiness
And that too in consort with undeviating peace


While recalling the bitter reminiscence of this painful experience
I think about the person who foremost came to my mind
I feared I was loosing that person
And would see no more of my acquaintance
That fear gripped me the most
I desperately prayed to God “Please save me…
I want to live to see that person once again”
That person is whom I call “The One”
The One gave me strength to fight out my weakness
The One gave my fragile numb knees strength to rise once again
The One made my arms rise sky high
To defeat the pretence appearance behind loosing fallacies.


(Guys, those who couldnt exactly get what the poem intends to say and would want the meaning or significance of the poem, leave a comment with ur email-id... i'll get back to you personally)

1 comments:

Kanwal Haqqi said...

You really hitted a deep thought.... it really came from the depths...seems to be!

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